tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post707845336806075939..comments2023-11-14T06:22:49.731-07:00Comments on Art on the Page: Opinions?Jill Bergmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16944474238989466997noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-48751088055327909862012-07-25T23:17:21.699-06:002012-07-25T23:17:21.699-06:00They are all so wonderful, but I like the tourist....They are all so wonderful, but I like the tourist. Such a universal theme. AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-74851059294054240142012-07-20T06:51:46.221-06:002012-07-20T06:51:46.221-06:00Thank you, Steve & Julia! :)
Julia- I'm g...Thank you, Steve & Julia! :) <br />Julia- I'm getting there about noon, but my parents are picking me up and we'll do some stuff around LA. So I won't get to the hotel until late Thursday. I'll look for you on Friday!Jill Bergmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16944474238989466997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-42913275391249817152012-07-20T05:38:39.383-06:002012-07-20T05:38:39.383-06:00I correct myself...didn't scroll far enough to...I correct myself...didn't scroll far enough to Birdland...Birdland is first, Summer Garden second...all are great work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-14722112955514521182012-07-20T05:36:22.294-06:002012-07-20T05:36:22.294-06:00I would use The Summer Garden. The others do what ...I would use The Summer Garden. The others do what they do well but they have some elements of perplexity. However, this adds the pull that can enhance the effectiveness of the writer so the others have their place certainly. But taken out of context, The Summer Garden seems both simpler in purpose and more complete so perhaps a better elevator pitch.Steve Hornnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-69104666021092811532012-07-19T21:44:49.953-06:002012-07-19T21:44:49.953-06:00The circus...no, the flower one...actually the bir...The circus...no, the flower one...actually the birds....final answer...the....circus...they're all great! What time are you getting to LA? I'll be there early on Thursday.Julia Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03577906856043143102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-46952799256062733742012-07-19T06:50:33.665-06:002012-07-19T06:50:33.665-06:00Thanks for the votes and good wishes!Thanks for the votes and good wishes!Jill Bergmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16944474238989466997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-8819085905014459152012-07-18T21:59:24.408-06:002012-07-18T21:59:24.408-06:00I like Circus best :) - good luck at the conferenc...I like Circus best :) - good luck at the conference!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09136337129934209874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-75387425824768409412012-07-18T21:34:57.078-06:002012-07-18T21:34:57.078-06:00I vote for the Circus because it makes me want to ...I vote for the Circus because it makes me want to go there! -MattAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-36556619727046227942012-07-18T21:27:47.709-06:002012-07-18T21:27:47.709-06:00I like Birdland & Tourist equal, but if just o...I like Birdland & Tourist equal, but if just one, I vote Birdland. I'm sure you'll do great at LA SCBWI ConferenceLaurie Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03064034944717434517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4489845009890441335.post-38054101748701705092012-07-18T21:25:59.864-06:002012-07-18T21:25:59.864-06:00The Tourists. No reason other than that I like it!...The Tourists. No reason other than that I like it! ;-)dinahmowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00052642938090553088noreply@blogger.com